Hello Kade! I'm Miro G and I'm from Paroa School. This is a cool post. You had a lot of things about kiwi! Maybe next time you could have added something about weka or another type of flightless bird! You could have also made it a bit smaller so I can read it because It is behind some of the writing on the side. Thanks, Mira
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ReplyDeleteI'm Miro G and I'm from Paroa School.
This is a cool post. You had a lot of things about kiwi! Maybe next time you could have added something about weka or another type of flightless bird! You could have also made it a bit smaller so I can read it because It is behind some of the writing on the side.
Thanks, Mira