Hi I'm Jacob. I like how you Told everyone why he picked his number and how you said which team he got drafted by when he started. Maybe next time you could add some more photos.
I found this informative to read and liked the interesting facts that you included; I also liekd the amount of detail that you put into this post, but for you to be BTB (Better than Before) you could proof read your work, re read it and get a friend to read it and check the puncuation, grammar, and spelling.
Other than that I really enjoyed reading this post, I hope you keep up the quality blog posts, Carter.
hey Kade, Mack here from paroa school, i like your post about lebron james and some of the history about him, lebron james is one of my favourite basketball players to, maybe next time you could add some more facts and photos about him.
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Hi I'm Jacob. I like how you Told everyone why he picked his number and how you said which team he got drafted by when he started. Maybe next time you could add some more photos.
ReplyDeleteHi Kade, Max from Paroa School.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very interesting post about Lebron James. He is one of my favourite basketball players. Maybe next time you could add some more information.
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ReplyDeleteHello Kade, Carter from Paroa School commenting.
ReplyDeleteI found this informative to read and liked the interesting facts that you included; I also liekd the amount of detail that you put into this post, but for you to be BTB (Better than Before) you could proof read your work, re read it and get a friend to read it and check the puncuation, grammar, and spelling.
Other than that I really enjoyed reading this post, I hope you keep up the quality blog posts,
Carter.
Hi kade jahvarn from paroa school i think that this is cool Lebron is one of my favourite players to
ReplyDeleteHi Kade I like the cool background you did and didn't know that he was that toll
ReplyDeletehi kade when do you think he will retire
ReplyDeleteHi, Zakaia from Paroa school and this post is pretty cool but I still think Michael Jordan is the GOAT. Zakaia.
ReplyDeletehey Kade, Mack here from paroa school, i like your post about lebron james and some of the history about him, lebron james is one of my favourite basketball players to, maybe next time you could add some more facts and photos about him.
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